Pollution, is one of the common problems in the world, pollution its one word, but it has several
meanings.As we know there are many types or kinds of pollution. I will disccuse one of them it's environment pollution; it’s the important pollution in all over the world.
Ther are many effects of environment pollution; a lot of people have suffered from these in different ways, like there activites and health .In addition, this pollution come from bad habits, like smokking and factories smoke. Also,the cars gases make the weather around us dangeros and unhealthy.These causes of pollution make a lot of healthy problems ;and many disease like asthma ,hung problems and difficult to breath.All these effects and more threating our life to the worest.
At last , I advice all the people to keep their environment clean and healty ;and avoidance of all these bad habits tom ake their life easier and safely.Pollution, is one of the common problems in the world, pollution its one word, but it has several meanings.As we know there are many types or kinds of pollution. I will disccuse one of them it's environment pollution; it’s the important pollution in all over the world.
Ther are many effects of environment pollution; a lot of people have suffered from these in different ways, like there activites and health .In addition, this pollution come from bad habits, like smokking and factories smoke. Also,the cars gases make the weather around us dangeros and unhealthy.These causes of pollution make a lot of healthy problems ;and many disease like asthma ,hung problems and difficult to breath.All these effects and more threating our life to the worest.
At last , I advice all the people to keep their environment clean and healty ;and avoidance of all these bad habits tom ake their life easier and safely.Pollution, is one of the common problems in the world, pollution its one word, but it has several meanings.As we know there are many types or kinds of pollution. I will disccuse one of them it's environment pollution; it’s the important pollution in all over the world.
Ther are many effects of environment pollution; a lot of people have suffered from these in different ways, like there activites and health .In addition, this pollution come from bad habits, like smokking and factories smoke. Also,the cars gases make the weather around us dangeros and unhealthy.These causes of pollution make a lot of healthy problems ;and many disease like asthma ,hung problems and difficult to breath.All these effects and more threating our life to the worest.
At last , I advice all the people to keep their environment clean and healty ;and avoidance of all these bad habits tom ake their life easier and safely.
Ther are many effects of environment pollution; a lot of people have suffered from these in different ways, like there activites and health .In addition, this pollution come from bad habits, like smokking and factories smoke. Also,the cars gases make the weather around us dangeros and unhealthy.These causes of pollution make a lot of healthy problems ;and many disease like asthma ,hung problems and difficult to breath.All these effects and more threating our life to the worest.
At last , I advice all the people to keep their environment clean and healty ;and avoidance of all these bad habits tom ake their life easier and safely.Pollution, is one of the common problems in the world, pollution its one word, but it has several meanings.As we know there are many types or kinds of pollution. I will disccuse one of them it's environment pollution; it’s the important pollution in all over the world.
Ther are many effects of environment pollution; a lot of people have suffered from these in different ways, like there activites and health .In addition, this pollution come from bad habits, like smokking and factories smoke. Also,the cars gases make the weather around us dangeros and unhealthy.These causes of pollution make a lot of healthy problems ;and many disease like asthma ,hung problems and difficult to breath.All these effects and more threating our life to the worest.
At last , I advice all the people to keep their environment clean and healty ;and avoidance of all these bad habits tom ake their life easier and safely.Pollution, is one of the common problems in the world, pollution its one word, but it has several meanings.As we know there are many types or kinds of pollution. I will disccuse one of them it's environment pollution; it’s the important pollution in all over the world.
Ther are many effects of environment pollution; a lot of people have suffered from these in different ways, like there activites and health .In addition, this pollution come from bad habits, like smokking and factories smoke. Also,the cars gases make the weather around us dangeros and unhealthy.These causes of pollution make a lot of healthy problems ;and many disease like asthma ,hung problems and difficult to breath.All these effects and more threating our life to the worest.
At last , I advice all the people to keep their environment clean and healty ;and avoidance of all these bad habits tom ake their life easier and safely.
Good job, Maitha. There are only a couple punctuation mistakes--in the first, third, and seventh sentences (comma splice, run-on, and incorrect use of semicolon). I give this paragraph a 7/10.
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