The envir
onment it’s the place around us .Its has natural resources on earth like air, water, plants, and animals .These resources have pollution .This pollution destroyed natural resources .There are many ways to destroy it .Some ways like pesticides and fertilizer land .In addition the rubbish and fire smoke destroy air .Although the water is the important thing because it’s the secret of our life .It has the pollution .Pollution of by oil spills and the ships accidents ,so these ways lead to kill life things .
onment it’s the place around us .Its has natural resources on earth like air, water, plants, and animals .These resources have pollution .This pollution destroyed natural resources .There are many ways to destroy it .Some ways like pesticides and fertilizer land .In addition the rubbish and fire smoke destroy air .Although the water is the important thing because it’s the secret of our life .It has the pollution .Pollution of by oil spills and the ships accidents ,so these ways lead to kill life things . 
I like your thoughts on the environment (and the picture). Also, your only punctuation problems come at the end--the last two sentences (following a subordinate clause with a comma, not a full stop). As a result, I score this one: 8/10
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