In my paragraph I will talk about my youngest brother. My brother name is Mohammed. He born in11of December in 2007 so he is one year old. He loves my mother very much. My brother is funny so everyone in the house loves him but he is naughty . He sometimes watches T.V with us, he usually watch Barney. Few days ago he becomes walking a few small steps. Also he says some easy word such as mammy and daddy. My brother makes the house alive. If we have occasion in our live I love to choose his clothes. I always go to the Marina Mall to make shopping for him, especially GAP shop because I find all things he needs also the quality of this brand is very good. In my free time I like playing with him because I feeling happy and I remember my childhood. The best game for him is playing with balls, yesterday my mother bought amazing game for Mohammed. The game including a small house and several color of balls. He loves this game and he played in it all the day. I think this game help the children to learn the name of the color. In conclusion I want to say Mohammed make our live very funny.
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ReplyDeletethe children is very nice and make the life fun .
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ReplyDeletehe is cute boy ^^. "mashalla".
I agree with the above commenters--he is very cute! He's also lucky to have such a good sister around. Anyway, you have a couple punctuation errors--a comma splice in the Barney sentence and a run-on in the Gap one. Not bad overall. My score: 8/10
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