Saturday, February 14, 2009

Hi all =)

A Good Parent

If we think about the future of the child. We can realize that
parents play the most effective role in children life because parents
draw the main points of their children the following requirements
should be acquired by good parent: financiall, emotionall, and
sociall support .In order to be a good parents. First, parents should be able to take care of their children financially. For example, parents should make sure that their children eat the proper foods, and dress appropriately. Second, parents should be able to take care of their children emotionally. For Example, parents have to respect their children ideas because that’s help them to become more confidant and have a strong personality. More over, parents have to show them their love. Because love is one of the most important features in proper development of the children. For instance, if we compare the children who grows with loving and that of children who grows by them selves or with out loving parent.Third, parents should be able to take care of their children socially. For example, parents have to direct their children to help the needy people because that’s help them to realize two things.

1 comment:

  1. Great thoughts on being a parent. I'll give you a 7/10 for three mistakes in the first 3 sentences! Comma following "if" clause--not full stop; run-on sentence in sentence 2; sentence fragment for sentence 3. Not bad overall.

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