Oprah Winfrey is famous person. She is introduction many Programs in U.S such as people are talking, G .M. CHICAGO and the famous programs Oprah Winfrey show. She was born in poor family. After the separation of her parents she lived with grandmother. She was back to her mother in 12 years. Where she was raped by a relative, gave birth to a child it did not live long. After that, her mother decided to send Oprah to live with her father, who had education and strict discipline. Began her correspondence to one of the radio channels, and introduction many Programs. She began works in famous program "Oprah Winfrey show". She became famous after this program.
Good writing, Loolyta. 10/10.
ReplyDeleteHowever, there are a few mistakes.
1. missing articles (mostly "a")
2. is introduction (should be..."introduced")
3. Sentence fragment--"Began her correspondence..."