Computer is useful machine .It’s a important technology nowadays .It can solve many problems like math and physical problems .In addition, It can get and keep information .Also, we can play games and enjoy our time .This technology has bad and good effects ,but these effects according to how to use it . Because the person is do that .I think we should be careful when we used the modern technology ,and we should know how to use it .
Hadya, okay...maybe not the most exciting topic in the world, but...okay. Your only mistake is with the Because sentence--not a full sentence but a fragment. Other than that, written well. 10/10
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