Angelina Jolie is an American film actor, she is born in Los Angeles and she is the daughter of actors JonVoight. She lived in villa with their families, her mother spokes French languages but her father spoke German languages. She preferred to watch movies regular with her mother and later explained her emotion about the movies. However, she had not been influenced by her father but she wanted to work as a fashion model and to be the most powerful actress women in the world.
There are many problems which challenges Angelina Jolie in her career. The first problem is the thriller film was critical failure because this film is about encourage TV report, which told Jolie is died that was published by Antonio, so the film was poorly received by critic. The second problem is recorded film in Beyond Borders .The film is about aid workers in Africa, that film was not critically and financially successful because there was not enough supply of electricity and available material.
There are many solutions to solve these problems that face Angelina in her position. Firstly, she decided to solve these problems with reporter who sent incorrect information to the critic by publishing the correct article so she received positive reviews and earned $156 millions of her film. Secondly, she provided an excellent facilities and equipments of studio and video in order to take the photograph of the film in available weather instead of storm or raining weather. As a result, she felt satisfied and successful in her film and won Oscar price.
There are many problems which challenges Angelina Jolie in her career. The first problem is the thriller film was critical failure because this film is about encourage TV report, which told Jolie is died that was published by Antonio, so the film was poorly received by critic. The second problem is recorded film in Beyond Borders .The film is about aid workers in Africa, that film was not critically and financially successful because there was not enough supply of electricity and available material.
There are many solutions to solve these problems that face Angelina in her position. Firstly, she decided to solve these problems with reporter who sent incorrect information to the critic by publishing the correct article so she received positive reviews and earned $156 millions of her film. Secondly, she provided an excellent facilities and equipments of studio and video in order to take the photograph of the film in available weather instead of storm or raining weather. As a result, she felt satisfied and successful in her film and won Oscar price.
Absolutely great, Safeya. You have shown some of her problems and shown her solutions very very well.
ReplyDeleteA couple comma splice errors at the beginning (first 2-3 sentences) and your topic sentence--there are many problems which challenges Angelina Jolie in her career--might better be expressed with present perfect. Other than those errors, this is more than fine.
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