Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Life today is easy for many people, but it is expensive. Living comfortably and securely are things that taken for granted .fox example travelling in the past is different from nowadays.
In the past, it was very difficult and dangerous to move from place to another.
Nowadays, traveling is easier and more comfortable than before because people travel by trains. Cars and plans which are faster and comfortable but it is very expensive.

1 comment:

  1. Lulwa,

    that taken for granted (missing verb "to be").

    .fox example travelling... (capitalize and spelling)

    Cars and plans... (fragment--not complete sentence).

    A couple mistakes but good.

    9/10

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