Azza AL-Qubassi is UAE businesswoman. Entered the field of manufacturing and jewelry design and set up the plant Arab jewelry and precious stones. Also, she is first woman in Jewelry makers and shapers of Arab. The first problem she faced is the jewelries and the gold’s are Too costly. The second problem is Prior to the commencement of a project that closed the doors in front of her, and believed it would not be given the opportunity adequate support, and a lot of things may be experienced by the crash at the outset. She solved their own problems. The solutions are first thing, She spent 3 years so she can be herself. The second thing, she did not leave anything standing in her face and the Stage will be creative and to prove themselves and will overtake.
Interesting subject. Sounds like a pioneer in the man's world of jewelry making.
ReplyDeleteYou only have a few writing mistakes here.
1. missing subject (she) in sentence 2
2. missing article (the) in sentence 3
3. Too costly (don't capitalize Too)
4. Prior to
5. She solved their (her) own problems.
Other than these one, this is quite fine.
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