chocolate is good for People covered because Steady nerves. the black chocolate is Better than white chocolate. Many people like eat chocolate so much that is bad for the health. Same childrin when eat chocolate becam Crazy. The best chocolate in Belgium. chocolate have many chape and size. Progress on all occasions, chocolate with coffee.
Okay...chocolate is good! You've convinced me.
ReplyDeleteNow, about your mistakes...
1. small letter sentence one
2. big letter P in People
3. because Steady nerves (missing verb)
4. missing gerund or infinitive following "like" in "like eat chocolate"
5. missing subject/pronoun--"that is bad for the health"
6. Same childrin when eat chocolate became Crazy.
I'll give you 10/10 for completing the assignment. However, watch those mistakes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!